Marking love hurts

"Love hurts"



Good bits:

• The sound worked well to add to the ambiance of the film along with the black and white balloon 
• The control of the camera was good most of the time
• The symbolism with the selective desaturation effect on the balloon.

Bad bits:

• It was  a very predictable film
• Occasionally the camera would be too shaky, during the POV shot from the girl
• A small variety of shots
• Some shots went on too long, especially when they are sitting on the bench, a close up of their hands would have helped break up the shot.
• More close ups to show emotion as it is a silent film

How it's helped me:

• Not to have shots that go on for a long time
• Choose music that fits well with my theme
• Close ups to show emotion are needed
• Use a variety of shots