Marking hide and seek

"Hide and Seek"

Good bits:

• Good idea
• Children acted well for their age
• A good variety of shots
• Excellent focus on mise en scene, clothing, cake etc
• Good continuety throughout
• Good use of dark and light to show different times

Bad Bits:

• Predictable story
• Seemed to change from the past to the present too quickly

How it helped me:

• A large amount of focus on mise en scene will help with the feel of the whole Short overall
• Be careful that the story doesn't seem to be rushed to an ending
• Child actors can work well but would need make sure they are good